Dienstag, 10. April 2007

More Poetry from Dana

MAYBY A GIFT OF SIGHT.SIGHT TO THOSE BLINDED BY DESPERATION,DESOLATION,FRUSTRATION,IN A WORLD THAT CAN BE SO COLD,THE SUN STILL WARMS.KEEPS ME WARM IN A DELICATE STATE OF MIND.A STATE OF BEING,OR TRUST.TRUST THAT WHAT WILL HAPPEN WILL BE A CHOICE,AND NOT A HARSH REALITY.TRUTH BEYOND THAT WHICH IS LOST CAN NOW BE FOUND.BROUGHT INTO YOUR LIFE LIKE A RAINDROP FROM THE SKY.FOR WHILE IN EVERY LIFE,A LITTLE RAIN MUST FALL,THERE ARE THOSE OF US WHO THROW DOWN THE UMBRELLA,AND RUN LIKE THE WIND .RUN TO FIND FREEDOM,THE CENTER OF OUR HAPPINESS,OUR WELL BEING.THOSE WHO CHOSE OTHER PATHS,WE LEARN FROM.NOT ONLY THAT THERE IS HATE IN THE WORLD,BUT THAT THERE IS ENOUGH OF IT.WHEN LOOKING AT THE HOURGLASS OF TIME,IT IS IMPORTANT TO REALIZE THAT FORGIVING AND FORGETING,IS USUALLY THE BEST THING TO DO.SOME POEPLE JUST NEED TO BE HELPED.



DO YOU HEAR THE WORLD...DO YOU HEAR IT ECHOING THROUGH A SIMULCAST STATION...BROADENING YOUR EMOTIONS...FEEDING YOUR FEARS...MAKING YOU IMMUNE TO CHAOS,DISORDER,EVEN DEATH...DO YOU KNOW WHAT IT MEANS TO DANCE ON FIRE...HAVE YOU SUNG WITH THE FORCE OF THE FALLING MOUNTAIN SNOW...DO YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE?AND IF YOU DO COULD YOU TELL ME WHO I AM...WHY IN THIS PLASTERED LAND OF DOUBT HAVEN'T WE FOUND...THE TRUE MEANING OF EXISTANCE,WHY HAVE WE SHUNNED THE...DOORS OPENED TO US LONG AGO.TO FLY AS FREE AS A BIRD IN THE NIGHT...A BIRD WITHOUT SIGHT...GAZING OUT INTO THE BLACKNESS OF KNOWLEDGE...TAKE ME TO THE FIELDS...THROW MY BODY ON THE FLOWING GREEN SEAS OF SATISFACTION;THE BEYOND...


AS FAR AS THE EYE COULD SEE.A FIELD OF TREES AN ENDLESS GREEN SCENE A WEATHERLESS SEAM THAT MAKES A MOON BEAM SCREAM SCREAMS DOWN TO THE EARTH AND CLASHES OF THE LEAVES OF THE TREES AND THE ROCKS OF THE EARTH. TO GIVE BIRTH.BIRTH TO NEW LIFE,INTO THE EARTH LIKE A FARMERS SCYTHE.CHOP DOWN THE CORN AND REGROW IT AGAIN.MY FRIEND I PRETEND TO BE MORE THAN I AM UNTIL FACADES END AND I DONT KNOW JUST WHEN I BEGAN TO END.I BEGAN TO END.


IN AN UNCONCIOUS MEMORY,I REMEMBER.BRING BACK WITH ME THOUGHTS AND WORDS.THOUGHTS THAT WANDERED A LONG TIME UNNOTICED.WORDS THAT WILL STING THOSE WHO ARE TARGETED LOSING ALL AND NOTHING AT ONCE WHAT IT WAS...A DREAM,A BEGINING OF WORLDS THAT BECOME BEFORE YOUR EYES BECAUSE THEY WERE ALREADY THERE.WHILE YOU WERE WAITING AND WATCHING THEY WERE LIVING AND BREATHING ENTRUSTING YOUTH AND AGE WITH THEIR WISDOM,BEAUTY.SHOWING ALL WHO WOULD ENTER THE OMNIPITANT GLOW OF THE WONDERS THEY'D CREATED.IN A WORD,IN A WORLD WHERE IT COULD HAPPEN.ANYTHING.LET YOUR MIND WANDER ENDLESSLY IN THE GARDEN.WHERE AND WHEN YOU ASK.IN THE GARDEN OF LIGHT,WHEN YOU ARRIVE.IF IT DAZZLES THE EYES,AND YANKS THE IMAGINATION,IT MUST APPEAR AND BE HAD.YOU CAN SHOW UP NAKED,ALONE,PAINTED IN PLAID.

20 Kommentare:

Anonym hat gesagt…

I enjoyed these very much dana.
Words flowing from one to another.
Very good.
tc

cathy hat gesagt…

words within is here:-
http://dana-wordswithin.blogspot.com/

just in case you are still having trouble gaining access.

cathy hat gesagt…

your powerful ideas are expressed eloquently in these poems.
get a book about writing to help you find a style that suits you.
writing in one block tends to smother your wonderful ideas.

Annelisa hat gesagt…

You have a wonderful imagery, Dana. I especially love some of the images in the second poem:

...DO YOU KNOW WHAT IT MEANS TO DANCE ON FIRE...HAVE YOU SUNG WITH THE FORCE OF THE FALLING MOUNTAIN SNOW......

I think, what Cathy said, was right... you have some really good ideas, but they get lost in the 'block' form. If it had been me posting these (but I recognise you are you and not me, and you should present your ideas/ poems in your own way), I might have posted them one at the time, so each stands and says something without interference from the other poems?

Anyway, if this is how you like to put them forward, with one relating to the others...then that's great

I've just not seen them written like this before - maybe you're breaking ground in a new area! :-D

val hat gesagt…

Dana, to answer your questions, George was my cousin, the eldest of my generation. He was born in 1933 so lived throught the war, but obviously was only a child. He was the only boy of our generation, so he was doted on by all. It didn't spoil him.

I don't have an address for your other blog, it doesn't come up on your profile.

ann hat gesagt…

you have a marvellous imagination and express it with great conviction

cathy hat gesagt…

Dana I'm not upset with you. I have some stuff to deal with and am not checking in so much

Mona hat gesagt…

Dear Dana.Yes I have been away for a short while.
I see that you have recovered your blog nightengale.

Do you know Dana, what you write is notcalled 'poetry' in literary terms. It is called ' poetry in prose'. The trend setters of such writing were James Joyce & Virginia Wolfe.The technique that you use here is the Stream Of Consciousness technique.[ google about that to read more]
Your expression and ideas are very potent & powerful, & I see great passion in you for writing.
You can get some of the above mentioned author's books from the library & read them.Your technique & craftsmanship reminds me of Joyce's 'Finneganwakes'.
Also read Virginia Wolfe's 'Mrs. Dalloway'.
& kep writing your prose. maybe one day you might emerge as an avante garde writer.
Also please pay attention to Lilette. She has to be your priority first, & she is so sweet, she must be such a joy of your life! I love that little girl of yours.& we all love you in the blogland.

cathy hat gesagt…

you ok Dana?

kwings hat gesagt…

Way to get it all out, I'm sure it helps :) Do you write really often?

Annelisa hat gesagt…

I've just re-read the first poem - I think it's brilliant! I saw in it this time such things I didn't see in the first reading. You have a style expression that's unusual, Dana, but highly effective the more I become aquainted with it!! :-)

I look forward to reading more!

Glad you're feeling better

Mona hat gesagt…

hello Dana
How are you, how is little Lillan?

When will you write some more???

Love always

Mona :)

cathy hat gesagt…

Have a good time I'm pleased for you.

Mona hat gesagt…

I feel happy for you Dana. May this new person bring sunshine & happiness in your life

Anonym hat gesagt…

As I reread this, it was brand new and full of new understanding.
Very good, I like it very much.
Thank you for visiting me today.
"all you need is Love" :)
tc

Annelisa hat gesagt…

I've just seen your message over at mine... I wish you all the happiness, and hope that it all works out for you, Dana...Have a luuverly weekend! ;-)

Charles hat gesagt…

Hi Dana,
I apologise but I've tagged you.

Mona hat gesagt…

hello Dana
((( HUGS)))

& this is for little Lillan
(((((((((HUGS))))))))

You are a very nice kind and an honest soul. You are so beautiful in your simple utter sheer pure truthfulness of your being.We all feel very fond of you & you deserve it.

Anonym hat gesagt…

hi dana, thinking of you.:)
tc

Annelisa hat gesagt…

Hi Dana... thanks for stopping by - good to see you again. I was hoping you might have written some more poetry (c'mon... you know you want to!!)

See you again soon! :-)